Monday, 13 October 2014

Feedback - Miss Spencer

Your conventions work shows promise. You have clearly understood manyof the conventions. However to take this above a level 2 I would like to see some look at the history of the genre, and some examples of this and the conventions.

Your pitch also shows promise. It does seem to fit into the thriller genre, but ensure that there are many conventions within the opening, including your characterisation, setting etc.

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