Feedback - Miss Spencer

Well done Jodie, you have made a good start to your coursework blog. As well as the analysis you have added other posts that enrich your research evidence, like the opening sequence post. At the moment this work is at a level 2/3 border, and in order to improve you should think about these suggestions:  

• If you comment of an element, then make sure you also discuss the effect on the audience and whether or not it is a typical convention of the genre.
• Remember DISTINCT, (Don't Ignore, Setting, Technical Code, Iconography, Narrative, Characterisation, Theme) Ensure you cover all of these areas in each analysis.
• Embed the film opening in each of your analysis and a variety of screen shots throughout all of your analysis.
• Ensure each post is using the same font
• Can you delete the empty posts and only put them up when you are ready to write them?